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  1. chinmayatspeaking

    Hi ! Please review the audio below. Can you rate this response as ETS would do? Thank you!

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    • Moderator

      Dear @chinmayatspeaking,

      The score: 3/4

      Response is mostly coherent, sustained and conveys relevant ideas/information. But, it exhibits some inaccurate use of grammatical structures and is somewhat limited in the range of structures used.

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  2. Arieta

    I prefer outdoor activities more than indoor activities.

    The first reason is because you are free to enjoy the nature in which way it comes to you which means you feel the nature closer, secondly is because you can get more inspired or get that much inspired by the nature or the places around that you can compose a song or write a poem. And thirdly because you’re not closed somewhere like you’d be on indoor activities. You can just take a deep breath, let it all out and just have fun.

    You’d also get the chance to meet more people that share the same interest on the activity as you do ,so the number of people being part of it wouldn’t be limited.

    Hence, I prefer more outdoor activities than indoor activities.

    Please review and rate this as ETS would!

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    • Moderator

      Dear @Arieta,

      Score: 4/4

      The response fulfills the demands of the task. Generally fluid expression. Clear progression of ideas.
      Some systematic grammatical errors are noticeable but do not obscure meaning.

      Instead of “The first reason is because / Secondly is because / Thirdly because”;

      You may just say “First of all / Secondly / Thirdly(without because)

      Instead of “I prefer … more than …”;

      I would say “I like more than …” or just “I prefer … (without more than)” or “I would prefer outdoor activities rather than indoor activities.

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      Score: 3/4

      The response addresses the task appropriately, but falls short of being fully developed.

      Minor difficulties with pronunciation are noticeable and may require listener effort at times.

      Response exhibits some imprecise or inaccurate use of grammatical structures. This affects overall fluency, but it does not seriously interfere with the communication of the message.

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      • amjad

        There are many activities I really enjoy when I do it whether it is indoor or outdoor. However, I prefer outdoor activities more than indoor activities for number of reasons.

        First, I love beautiful nature. I like to see wildlife animals especially cats and birds because the color of the birds bring me to exemplary world. I feel like you must live happily with your family and friends and do not care about your temporary problems.

        Second, to live in a healthy way, you should breath a clear oxygen from atmosphere. My town’s park is a very comfortable place and I feel calm in it.

        Last, but not at least, l love my family, friends, and my relatives and outdoor activities get us to be close to each other.

        For these reasons, I would prefer outdoor activities rather than indoor activities.

    • Moderator

      Dear @amjad,

      The Score: 3/4

      The response addresses the task appropriately. Response is coherent, sustained and conveys relevant ideas / information. Relationships between ideas are clear. Well done!

      Response exhibits some imprecise and inaccurate use of grammatical structures.

      Instead of “There are many activities I really enjoy when I do it”
      I would say “There are many activities I really enjoy doing”

      “I prefer outdoor activities more than indoor activities” is not correct.
      You should say “I prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities”

      “for a number of reasons” (“a” is missing.)

      Instead of “you should breath a clear oxygen from atmosphere”
      I would say “you should breathe fresh air”

      Also be careful! “breath” is noun and “breathe” is verb.

      “Last, but not at least,” is not correct.
      You should say “Last, but not least,” (without “at”)

      Instead of “outdoor activities get us to be close to each other.”
      I would say “outdoor activities get us closer to each other.” You don’t need to say “to be”.

      The main aim of this website is to practice TOEFL Speaking. We highly recommend you to record your audio response. Thus, we’ll be able to evaluate pronunciation, intonation and pacing.

      Continue to answer other questions. Practice makes perfect!

      Best,

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    • Moderator

      Hi @Mary Silver,

      The Score: 4/4

      The response addresses the task appropriately. It is mostly coherent, sustained and conveys related ideas/information. Relationship between ideas are clear.

      Generally well-paced flow. Speech is generally clear. Your pronunciation is good.

      The response demonstrates effective use of grammar and vocabulary.

      Response time for Question Type 2 is 45 seconds. You should conclude your response in the last 5 seconds (40-45).

      Best,

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  3. himali

    Both Activities are important but I Prefer to Indoor activities

    First reason is that, I like to decorate my home like Putting some new photo frame, Vase and antique piece and I also change interior of my home in monthly it means that arrangement different way.

    Second reason that, I also like indoor activities such kind listening music in my room, Reading any novel outside garden at my home, Cooking something new dishes , maintaining plants in garden. These are best activities to time spend at my home.

    Whenever I feel some rest and I need to remove my stress that time I would be start this all activities.

    So that’s why I like indoor activity.

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  4. Anusha

    I prefer outdoor rather than indoor activities.

    Firstly, I love to play outdoor games like tennis and shuttle with my friends. In my childhood days , I use to play cricket along with my classmates even though I was a girl.

    Secondly, Doing activities outside like gardening and walking gives me Fresh air, peace of mind and off course it keeps me fit physically and mentally.

    Finally, On weekends I and my family go out for adventure. This gives me an immense strength in me.
    So I support outdoor activities.

    Thank You, I request you rate it sooner. As my exam in a week. My Adobe is not working.

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